From here
on the floor
with the grains of the wood
and the stains of blood
and whiskey
from here is where I rise.
Splinters in the wood
and scratches all around
become the grain of life
and so we find a path
and pattern
in the most unlikeliest of places–
on this floor.
There are lines that speak of order
even down so low as this
and it is God’s sweet grace
to open our eyes that we might see
the lines beneath the whiskey
and dirt
and blood.
Wow. Unique. Quietly hard-hitting. A strange beauty.
Why thank you Miss Veil. I appreciate the comment. Blessings and peace.
I can’t tell you how excited I am to see such a talented poet just get Freshly Pressed! Congrats!!
Uncle Jesse says he thinks this is very powerful.
Uncle Jesse is my hero… my soft curly-haired looking hero.
I’m so glad this was freshly pressed! Congrats and I love the poem…very strong imagery.
I am happy to hear your reaction. Thank you.
wonderful, unique and meaningful.
Much obliged. Thank you for taking the time to read.
This is so beautiful and thought provoking. Thank you for sharing it.
Thank you for reading it.
It was my pleasure. Have a great day 🙂
Wherever we are is always where we start from. I like this poem, thank you for sharing it.
I am glad that something in it resonates with you. Sometimes we feel as though we should be somewhere other than where we are and so we fail to start at all.
That exact thought is what made me start my blog. Glad there are others out there who feel the same. Striking piece. Looking forward to more
It is so nice to be lead here from freshly pressed congrats on your quality poem
Thank you. I still love your gravitar picture.
Beautiful and so true. Even in the midst of the most painful of pains, in the most chaotic of messes, His mercy, grace and love is there for us to embrace!
And that after we see that it has embraced us already.
Absolutely!
Stunning, beautifully manifested! Totally refreshed my heart and soul. Thank you! Cheers.
I am glad to hear it.
Truly beautiful, Soul. Congrats on being Freshly Pressed! This is wonderful!
Thank you. Always remember the balloons.
Love the poem but wouldn’t call it a strange beauty, I think it’s beautifully strange.
Well that sounds like high praise. I’ll take it sir, I’ll take it.
“There are lines that speak of order
even down so low as this”
🙂
😉
Love it.
I am so glad to hear it. Feel free to look around. There is a lot more where that came from already posted (as in hundreds of poems).
Beautiful poem .Wishing you healthy and happy new year.jalal
Much obliged.
I like it!
Excellent. I’d be lying if I said that didn’t make me smile.
An interesting way of talking about order and pattern within suffering. Thank you for sharing that with us.
I’m glad that you took the time to read it.
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Incredible! I rarely read poetry that moves me like this did.
You are kind.
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Unbelievably moving, thoughtful poetry.
Cheers.
That one hit home… Thank you
You are welcome.
This is a beautiful poetry. THanks for sharing!
You are welcome.
wooww!! This is amazing! truly beautiful.. 🙂
Thank you for your wow. It is always great to see familiar gravitars in a sea of new faces.
I enjoy poetry, and I love the descriptive and honest way you have written this piece.
It is wonderful to hear that someone likes my descriptions.
beautiful 🙂
I am glad to have you.
Thank you for sharing your piece, it’s quite the eye-opener. Color me intrigued.
– Jonathan I http://styleoverstress.wordpress.com
Plenty more where that came if you are interested.
Well said (:
This is a great piece! Powerful imagery depicted through your words. Congrats on being FP!
– Mihir Kamat
http://mihirkamat.wordpress.com/
I am a bit surprised to see that I have been freshly pressed.
Nicely put! I appreciate it, it is so meaningful.
Cheers and thank you.
Your welcome.
And a HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Great read, very powerful! It would be awesome if you could check out my blog too http://herewegoblogdotcom.wordpress.com/
Thank you for stopping by. I will talk to my secretary and check my schedule. 😉
Do you have another post with this same theme? Interesting poetry.
I’ll have to think about that. There are currently over 500 posts… That is a lot of poetry to sift through… if anything else comes to mind though I will let you know.
That is really cool. Thanks for sharing. http://www.segmation.wordpress.com
Wonderfully written, congrats on being Freshly Pressed!
Thank you very much sportsandthecross.
Love this. 🙂
I am glad to hear it monochromejunkie.
Very strong poetry, very much needed in time of chaos 🙂 reminds of a line from “The Desiderata” With all its sham, drudgery and broken dreams, it is still a beautiful world. Have a great 2013 and congrats on being FP. Way to go!
Happy New year to you as well. Cheers.
it is terrific how you captured the moment when a soul is so in despair that there is no chance to speak… only to cry out. and in these amazing stages of life the real miracle happens when a person starts to see not with the eyes of the body but with the spirit.
i loved your poem….
Well then perhaps I have ended up down on this floor for a reason.
This speaks to me thank you
You are welcome.
Thank you for this poem, it is unique.
You are welcome.
Just stumbled accross your poem, must go in search of more of your poetry also will have to go back on this piece and re read I’m sure a different emerges after each reading, Happy New Year – catch up in 2013
Chris.
OOOPS!!! always re read before sending – hit the (c) button twice & left out (image) after different.
Chris.
No worries.
Thank you and good morning at least it is on this side of the pond anyway – crisp and frosty.
Same here– just got back from a run and it was crisp and frosty.
Nice.
I try.
You succeed!
waow…awesome..
Thank you sir. I am glad you took the time to read it.
its my pleasure..
I am going to try and return the favour– but being freshly pressed has given me twenty times my normal traffic (literally) so it may take me a while. But please know that I always appreciate readers (and not just when you like what I’ve written).
Just beautiful, thank you. So glad to discover your poetry through freshly pressed.
I am still surprised actually.
Nice thinking poem…….such a briliant poet.
That is high praise.
Outstanding. Last five lines are especially powerful. Rich contrasts in those last few lines.
Well thank you sir. Cheers.
Thank you for writing this and inspiring me today.
I never thought I would inspire someone… you are welcome, of course. Cheers.
This is a beautiful piece. The idea behind it reminds me of something I wrote many many years ago. It is so amazing how someone else’s journey (yours) can shed light into our own. Thanks!
Becca,
Thanks for stopping by.
-Soul Walker
certainly. I look forward to reading more…
Feel free to check out my blog if you like…
http://beccayure.wordpress.com/
It’s already open in another tab.
🙂 thanks for peaking into my world!
Happy singing and playing in 2013… which reminds me… I better go practice some scales. Cheers.
oooh congrats on being FP’d!! you deserve it – your poetry is outstanding, as is this piece.
great work!
The real triumph is being Freshly Pressed without having a picture in your post.
none needed, you paint it yourself 🙂
it is extremely rare to find poetry in the freshly pressed section – that it was you i found there is even cooler.
😉
Very unique, and interesting. This opens up my mind to the beauty of God.
Well I promise you I didn’t see that coming. Happy New Year.
After reading this carefully, this came
“…that in each thing He created (and allowed to be created) God speaks.” -vjmagdadaro
Sir, this is indeed thought provoking.
Cheers.
Beautiful Quotations….
You are like a modern-day Paul. Paul was real, wrote about numerous difficult situations & circumstances, oftentimes in poetry format, which in turn would encourage others. That’s what I think about when reading your work. Great stuff! Congrats on being Freshly Pressed : )
Well I suppose he was involved in murder and persecution… so I guess I can see the comparison… only I think his repentance may have been a little more immediate and thorough though.
Your writing is always beautiful! Congrats on the freshly pressed 🙂
hastywords,
Thank you.
-Soul Walker
This is very wonderful. Thanks for sharing!
You are kind to say so. Cheers.
I see: a poor alcoholic who dies in a wooden cabin in the mountains, and comes out of his body…or… maybe he hasn’t dies but is just reborn? This is Gods grace…either death or a second chance? Hits close to home for me! Thank you for sharing!
I’m sorry to hear that most things I write would hit home with anyone. Unfortunately I know how enjoyable many of life’s experiences are for many people.
This is beautiful. You are very talented! I look forward to reading more of your poetry!
Well you are in luck because there are already hundreds of poems posted for your perusal.
I am very excited about that!
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Does anyone feel like poetry?
Ghost.
It’s a very good poem. I think it would be better without the line “most unlikliest of places” unless you wrote it that way intentionally for a reason I don’t see. “most unlikely of places” is more logical. Also, something I learned while editing a journal in college which I came to appreciate and monitor in my own writing has to do with “split infinitives” e.g. the title: “But He Can Always Speak”…the “split involves separating “can” and “speak” with “always”…many editors would suggest: “But He Always Can Speak” or “But He Can Speak Always”…I know it can be a matter of taste and I make the same mistake all the time myself. We’re all so used to speaking that way that it sounds correct until you get used to the gramatically correct forms. Sometimes I find myself holding on to the colloquial forms out of stubborness or because I want to speak colloquially so I’m curious if you’re doing it intentionally or not and why if so.
What I like most about the poem is the imagery which is very strong. I can identify with it as an alcoholic having considerrd those points of view more closely than I’d like to admit sometimes. I’ve written a few from this perspective. We begin again from wherever we regain consciousness of our position I guess as long as we don’t get too distracted by wondering whether or not there might be a basement beneath the ground floor of misery…you know? I like the way you put it…the whiskey, blood etc…and in my case more than once…the vomit…but blood works better. So, I find myself wondering if your poem was about one of those ephiphanies one sometimes has on a barroom floor…?
Congratulations on being “Freshly Pressed!” Peace!
If your english grammar is lacking you will often miss something in my poetry. I don’t do anything on accident. Peace to you as well.
well, that’s why I commented and shared my observation so that maybe you would show me what I missed…why did you write “most unlikliest” vs “most unlikely”…it’s a straigtforward question…
Don’t misunderstand me, I don’t think your grammar is lacking. I just wanted to confirm your suspicions. As to explanations… it’s too soon. Perhaps if you are still interested in a month or two everything will have settled enough for me… but straitforward answers about some parts of my poetry are always going to be unlikely. I do appreciate that you would consider my intention before you “made it your own.” I have grown intrigued by the place of authorial intention in poetry reading. Let me know if you are still interested in a month or two. And thank you again for taking so much time to consider a piece of mine. Cheers.
In the mean time, I will be considering your questions (of course) and if I am up to it sooner I will definitely respond sooner.
Nice and meaningful phrases. Truly God is there to remind us to realize something! Happy New Year!
And to you as well sir.
Soul,
WOOHOO!!
Le Clown
Le Clown,
This is clearly your fault.
-Soul Walker
Also, Happy new year sir.
this piece reminds me of the haunting song “whiskey lullabye.” thank you for sharing! 🙂
Good song.
Intriguing and very thought provoking! Love it!
Excellent… although I would still be grateful even if you didn’t like it and took the time to tell me. Happy new year. Cheers.
And to You! Peace.
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Short and Well written!
“There are lines that speak of order
even down so low as this…”
My favorite sentence in your very moving poem!
Congratulations on being Freshly Pressed!
Thanks so much.
is it unusual my heart rate scaled a notch while reading that, simply enchanting.
Well that is unexpected for me. Thank you delilahdoolittle.
ah, wow!
Happy new year to you onga7.
happy new year to you too soul walker.
Wow. There is such simplicity to this poem, but it still has so much depth. Incredible job!
Cheers to you peggymen.
So thankful that this beautiful message was Freshly Pressed. Blessings to you!
I am glad you found beauty in it. Thank you for your words and your blessings. Cheers.
Love the imagery. You said volumes in only three stanzas. Nice work!
Cheers to you.
Powerful – thank you!
You are welcome.
Damn it, why can’t I understand poetry? But it all sounds so nice.
Why thank you.
No problem Mr. Soul Walker
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