To Rest

A day gone by is just a nail

Pounded deeply in

You’re never getting out from this

Or so you would believe.

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15 thoughts on “To Rest

  1. The entire universe, for each of us, is what we BELIEVE it to be! Wonderful last line: I agree completely that last lines are just as important in making one’s point as the title. ESPECIALLY if we, the readers, read through and treasure our first, instinctive responses rather than over-thinking, over-analyzing the poem. Poems, like music, are the voices of the soul. You seem to perform excellently in that function. Wonderful! Thank you.

  2. hm. the last line makes me think of a crazy girl jumping around with pom poms with her dog biting your ankles. i don’t know why but perhaps it’s because i think you see the light to insane happiness, and what i’ve just described is insanely happy. ? x

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