Do I desire to be free
Really free inside my soul?
Or do I simply want to be
Want to be at ease?
If I found the way up through,
would I make it to the top?
Or would the path prove far too hard
and leave me stuck up high?
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A Soul's Walk 
Too high?
I don’t really get what your asking.
“too high” came across as a bad thing. Flying high is the always the best part….of anything.
The last line, rather.
Perhaps it would help if you imagined climbing a mountain instead of flying through clouds… of course if you haven’t climbed a mountain… wait, we have the internet! I am sure there is plenty of imagination fodder for all your mountaineering dreams!
If that didn’t help clarify anything feel free to keep asking questions. Eventually I am sure something will make itself known.
Beautiful and meaningful, I like your style.
Thank you very much.
My pleasure!